[Vp-integration-subgroup] [Vp-reproduce-subgroup] Paper review and revision check list
Jonathan Karr
jonrkarr at gmail.com
Tue Jan 18 21:38:37 PST 2022
Hi Jacob,
I approve. It looks like there were efforts to address many of the
reviewers' concerns.
Regards,
Jonathan
On Tue, Jan 18, 2022 at 3:09 AM Winston Garira <Winston.Garira at univen.ac.za>
wrote:
> I APPROVE!
>
> Thank you.
>
> Winston
>
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> *From:* Ruth Bowness <rb2250 at bath.ac.uk>
> *Sent:* Tuesday, January 18, 2022 7:57:53 AM
> *To:* Jacob Barhak <jacob.barhak at gmail.com>; Gilberto Gonzalez-Parra <
> gilberto.gonzalezparra at nmt.edu>
> *Cc:* Faeder, James R <faeder at pitt.edu>; Rahuman Sheriff <
> sheriff at ebi.ac.uk>; vp-reproduce-subgroup at lists.simtk.org <
> vp-reproduce-subgroup at lists.simtk.org>;
> vp-integration-subgroup at lists.simtk.org <
> vp-integration-subgroup at lists.simtk.org>; John Gennari <gennari at uw.edu>;
> Ruth Bowness <rec9 at st-andrews.ac.uk>; Winston Garira <
> Winston.Garira at univen.ac.za>; Jonathan Karr <jonrkarr at gmail.com>
> *Subject:* Re: [Vp-reproduce-subgroup] [Vp-integration-subgroup] Paper
> review and revision check list
>
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> I approve. Many thanks!
> Ruth
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> *From:* Jacob Barhak <jacob.barhak at gmail.com>
> *Sent:* 18 January 2022 04:48
> *To:* Gilberto Gonzalez-Parra <gilberto.gonzalezparra at nmt.edu>
> *Cc:* Faeder, James R <faeder at pitt.edu>; Rahuman Sheriff <
> sheriff at ebi.ac.uk>; vp-reproduce-subgroup at lists.simtk.org <
> vp-reproduce-subgroup at lists.simtk.org>;
> vp-integration-subgroup at lists.simtk.org <
> vp-integration-subgroup at lists.simtk.org>; John Gennari <gennari at uw.edu>;
> Ruth Bowness <rb2250 at bath.ac.uk>; Ruth Bowness <rec9 at st-andrews.ac.uk>;
> Winston Garira <Winston.Garira at univen.ac.za>; Jonathan Karr <
> jonrkarr at gmail.com>
> *Subject:* Re: [Vp-reproduce-subgroup] [Vp-integration-subgroup] Paper
> review and revision check list
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> Hi Ruth, Hi Jonathan, Hi Winston,
>
> You are the last 3 authors that need approval - I apologize in advance if
> you sent your final approval and I did not get it. Sometimes it gets lost.
> Please REPLY TO ALL to this email with APPROVE, DISAPPROVE, or ABSTAIN so
> we can have your approval in public record and resolve this quickly.
>
> Hopefully you can do it within a day or two - both reviewers endorsed the
> paper and I just sent the editor the message below.
>
>
> Sheriff, your recollection is correct - Tomas Helikar did participate in
> our discussions. Yet the idea of sorting the challenges belongs to John
> Gennari who managed one of the versions. That version was not traceable, so
> any text taken from it, had to be validated by the authors that wrote that
> text. As far as I know no new contributions in the submitted version can be
> traced back to Tomas and he did not claim any contribution that was omitted
> nor raised any objection - and I did ask several times for objections by
> anyone. So his name is not in the list of authors, yet he is
> acknowledged in the paper acknowledgement section since he did participate
> in some meetings. If you ask me, I believe he wanted to contribute when we
> opened the paper for contributions, yet could not find the time.
>
> Tomas, if I am wrong, please correct me now so we can fix this prior to
> finalization. .
>
> And Sheriff, this paper is somewhat reproducible. If you trace back the
> versions we have public, you can find all authors listed contributing with
> a few exceptions. For example, John Rice contributed significant portions
> of the reproducibility section, yet I uploaded the text from him into the
> paper - so you will see my name instead of his. Also, some contributors
> added comments that I edited into the paper in the early days. Some authors
> also contributed to the activities that generated references for the paper
> - so their contribution was substantial. As far as I know the list of
> authors we have is complete except from John Gennari who made a large
> contribution to the paper, yet chose to abstain yet allowed us to proceed
> and use the text - I still hope he will rejoin, yet honor his decision if
> he chooses not to. He is acknowledged for his contribution - this way he
> gains some honor.
>
>
> Hopefully the last few authors will approve as well as the editor and we
> can move forward.
>
> Jacob
>
>
>
>
> ########## The message I send to the editor #############
>
> Hi Shayn,
>
>
>
> You will find a new manuscript draft in the system - I just uploaded
> figures in different formats in high resolution as the first reviewer
> requested.
>
>
>
> I would like to add one more affiliation for one of our authors - William
> Waites has two affiliations - see below - I tried to update this in the
> system, yet the system blocks me from editing the authors list for some
> reason.
>
> William Waites, Centre for Mathematical Modelling of Infectious Diseases,
> London School of Hygiene and Tropical Medicine, London, UK and Department
> of Computer and Information Sciences, University of Strathclyde, Glasgow,
> Scotland
>
>
>
> I would ask to delay the manuscript until all our authors approve the
> final version - we have 15 of the 18 approve the manuscript - I will do my
> best to get the last 3 approve quickly. Once I get approval I can submit.
>
>
>
> Thank you for processing this quickly. I wish our big group will be as
> fast as you.
>
>
> Jacob
>
>
>
>
>
> On Mon, Jan 17, 2022 at 6:34 PM Gilberto Gonzalez-Parra <
> gilberto.gonzalezparra at nmt.edu> wrote:
>
> The status has changed to
> 17 Jan 2022
> Review of Review Editor 1 finalized.
> 13 Jan 2022
> Editorial Office reminded you to respond to reviewer 1 and/or resubmit
> your manuscript in the discussion forum.
> 10 Jan 2022
> Review of Review Editor 2 finalized.
> So both reviewers endorsed it. BTW, approve.
>
> ***************************************************************************
> Gilberto C. Gonzalez-Parra, Ph.D in Applied Mathematics.
> Faculty of the Mathematics Department
> New Mexico Tech, NM, USA.
>
> ****************************************************************************
>
>
> On Mon, Jan 17, 2022 at 4:07 PM Faeder, James R <faeder at pitt.edu> wrote:
>
> Approve.
>
>
>
> Thanks Jacob and everyone else for all of your efforts on the revisions.
>
>
>
> Best regards,
>
>
>
> Jim
>
>
>
> *From: *Rahuman Sheriff <sheriff at ebi.ac.uk>
> *Date: *Monday, January 17, 2022 at 5:02 PM
> *To: *Jacob Barhak <jacob.barhak at gmail.com>
> *Cc: *vp-reproduce-subgroup at lists.simtk.org <
> vp-reproduce-subgroup at lists.simtk.org>,
> vp-integration-subgroup at lists.simtk.org <
> vp-integration-subgroup at lists.simtk.org>, John Gennari <gennari at uw.edu>,
> Faeder, James R <faeder at pitt.edu>, Alexander Kulesza <
> alexander.kulesza at novadiscovery.com>
> *Subject: *Re: [Vp-reproduce-subgroup] [Vp-integration-subgroup] Paper
> review and revision check list
>
> Dear Jacob,
>
> Please find the Figure 1 attached.
>
>
>
> It is not clear to me whether the manuscript has been accepted. If the
> reviewer1’s response is overdue, we need to wait. If the review1 doesn’t
> respond at all, the editor might assign the manuscript to another reviewer.
>
>
>
> Irrespective of that I approve.
>
>
>
> On a different note, if I remember correctly, Tomas Helikar also
> contributed to the ordering of the table which is used in the figure.
> probably he mad other contributions too in John Gennari’s version.
>
>
>
> Best regards
>
> Sheriff
>
>
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>
>
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> On 14 Jan 2022, at 13:19, Alexander Kulesza <
> alexander.kulesza at novadiscovery.com> wrote:
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>
> Dear Jacob, dear all,
>
>
>
> APPROVE
>
>
>
> Attached, Figure 2 in HR in different formats.
>
>
>
> Best
>
> Alexander
>
>
>
> On Fri, 14 Jan 2022 at 07:38, Jacob Barhak <jacob.barhak at gmail.com> wrote:
>
> Thanks Marcella,
>
>
>
> In that case, it seems we have no reviewer objection and hopefully the
> editor will be positive as well . To speed up the process we need
> the following::
>
> 1. Sheriff - please send a high resolution image for Figure 1
>
> 2. Alex - Please send a high resolution image for Figure 2
>
> 3. Everyone please review the manuscript and Reply to all in this email
> with one word - either APPROVE, DISAPPROVE, ABSTAIN
>
>
>
> Where:
>
>
>
> APPROVE means you are ok with the version we reached - please note that we
> do have some new elements there and your approval means you understand what
> it means - please read the paper well and understand the nuances of
> approval.
>
>
>
> DISAPPROVE- means that you no longer agree with the version we reached and
> we need to discuss the paper more and withdraw it - if you have some
> serious objection, it is the last chance to get the paper back to the
> drawing board
>
>
>
> ABSTAIN - You have no objection for the paper being published, yet you
> want your name withdrawn
>
>
>
> Also, if anyone else has any objections for this paper being published,
> please raise them now so we can discuss them.
>
>
>
> I call again to John Gennarri to join us as an author - he did
> substantial work and many of his contributions are in the final version -
> including the order in figure 2. I can trace back many of his contributions
> and I think he should get credit for it - hopefully my last call will be
> accepted and he will rejoin.
>
>
>
> William - I did not forget your second affiliation - I just could not
> change it in the system - I will write to the editor about that when we get
> the final acceptance notice.
>
>
>
> I look forward to seeing your final decisions - hopefully it will be fast
> this time.
>
>
>
> Jacob
>
>
>
>
>
> On Thu, Jan 13, 2022 at 8:50 PM Torres, Marcella <mtorres at richmond.edu>
> wrote:
>
> Sorry, I was not clear enough: no response is required for Reviewer 2, as
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> *From:* Jacob Barhak <jacob.barhak at gmail.com>
> *Sent:* Thursday, January 13, 2022 8:14 PM
> *To:* Torres, Marcella <mtorres at richmond.edu>
> *Cc:* Rahuman Sheriff <sheriff at ebi.ac.uk>;
> vp-reproduce-subgroup at lists.simtk.org <
> vp-reproduce-subgroup at lists.simtk.org>;
> vp-integration-subgroup at lists.simtk.org <
> vp-integration-subgroup at lists.simtk.org>; John Gennari <gennari at uw.edu>;
> Faeder, James R <faeder at pitt.edu>
> *Subject:* Re: [Vp-reproduce-subgroup] [Vp-integration-subgroup] Paper
> review and revision check list
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> Thanks Marcella, Thanks Gilberto,
>
>
>
> Since the second reviewer did not respond, I think we have more time - we
> did respond in time however.
>
>
>
> The figures were provided by Alex and Sheriff - they seem pretty good
> resolution to me, yet if we want increased resolution, they will have to
> generate those again from the same software that generated thm originally -
> Basically the images have to be at least 300 dpi and export it as pdf and
> extract it as tiff or eps - not jpg.
>
>
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> Section 2.2.2 in the instruction provides information about the image
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> Hopefully we can have those ready.
>
>
>
> However, I do ask that all authors be ready to approve the paper assuming
> the other reviewer will be positive - we worked on thai for a year and
> there were many discussions - before this paper gets published I want all
> authors to be good with the final outcome. We will do this formally like we
> did before - yet I want everyone to be ready to avoid any delays. Hopefully
> it will take us less than 3 weeks this time.
>
>
>
> Jacob
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> On Thu, Jan 13, 2022 at 1:05 PM Torres, Marcella <mtorres at richmond.edu>
> wrote:
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> Hi again all,
>
>
>
> On the 7th I shared comments from Reviewer 1 that we are now late
> responding to. Is it possible to provide high resolution figures, or no
> (see below)?
>
>
>
> Reviewer 2 has endorsed the manuscript.
>
>
>
> <image.png>
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> Reviewer 1 comment:
>
> *Reviewer 1* | 07 Jan 2022 | 14:36
>
> *#3*
>
> I would like to thank the authors for having fully addressed my comments.
> I'm satisfied about the quality the manuscript has been reached in this
> latest version. Finally, I would only suggest the authors to provide an
> high quality resolution of both new figures. Thank you.
>
>
>
>
>
> Marcella Torres, Ph.D.
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> *From:* Vp-reproduce-subgroup <
> vp-reproduce-subgroup-bounces at lists.simtk.org> on behalf of Rahuman
> Sheriff <sheriff at ebi.ac.uk>
> *Sent:* Monday, January 10, 2022 3:09 PM
> *To:* Jacob Barhak <jacob.barhak at gmail.com>
> *Cc:* vp-reproduce-subgroup at lists.simtk.org <
> vp-reproduce-subgroup at lists.simtk.org>;
> vp-integration-subgroup at lists.simtk.org <
> vp-integration-subgroup at lists.simtk.org>; John Gennari <gennari at uw.edu>;
> Faeder, James R <faeder at pitt.edu>
> *Subject:* Re: [Vp-reproduce-subgroup] [Vp-integration-subgroup] Paper
> review and revision check list
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> Thanks Jakob for submitting the revision and others for the support.
> Thanks William for editing my response.
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> Best
>
> Sheriff
>
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>
>
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> On 7 Jan 2022, at 04:52, Jacob Barhak <jacob.barhak at gmail.com> wrote:
>
>
>
> Thanks Hana, Thanks William, and thanks to Gilberto, Alex, and Sheriff,
>
>
>
> With your help and some effort, the revised paper was resubmitted in time
> - just now.
>
>
>
> William, please keep on reminding me about your second affiliation - I
> kept a comment as a reminder to do this - the submission system did
> not allow making any changes in Author information - not sure why - if this
> gets accepted we should ask the editor to add your affiliation manually.
>
>
>
> I urge all other authors to look at the changes we made and our response.
> We will have to approve the manuscript with everyone before it gets
> published - hopefully we will convince the reviewers this review round.
>
>
>
> Jacob
>
>
>
> On Thu, Jan 6, 2022 at 3:51 PM Dobrovolny, Hana <h.dobrovolny at tcu.edu>
> wrote:
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> I've read through the paper and fixed a few grammar mistakes.
>
> Hana
>
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> vp-integration-subgroup-bounces at lists.simtk.org> on behalf of Jacob
> Barhak <jacob.barhak at gmail.com>
> *Sent:* January 5, 2022 11:48 PM
> *To:* William Waites; James Glazier
> *Cc:* vp-reproduce-subgroup at lists.simtk.org;
> vp-integration-subgroup at lists.simtk.org; John Gennari; Faeder, James R
> *Subject:* Re: [Vp-integration-subgroup] [Vp-reproduce-subgroup] Paper
> review and revision check list
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> Greetings paper contributors,
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>
> Gilberto has addressed the final point and added text in the paper and
> review, thus concluding our response.
>
>
>
> I went over the paper from start to finish again and cleaned it up.
>
>
>
> There are two last comments in the paper addressed to William Waites and
> James Glazier - if you can quickly check those, it would help.
>
>
>
> If someone else wants to read the paper once more, please do this today -
> otherwise I will convert the paper and our response to reviewers and submit
> it to the Journal portal.
>
>
>
> If anyone has any objections, now is the time to raise them so we can
> withdraw rather than submit.
>
>
>
> Here is the link to the revised paper:
>
>
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> Here is the link to response for reviewers:
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> https://docs.google.com/document/d/1bO1CDbMMlyyweYayP9rGohPIfgvIhfe14sFchtJMJ-s/edit?usp=sharing
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> Hopefully there will be no objections and can submit this tomorrow.
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> Jacob
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> On Tue, Jan 4, 2022 at 11:30 PM Jacob Barhak <jacob.barhak at gmail.com>
> wrote:
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> Hi Alex, Hi William, Hi Gilberto, and all other contributors.
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>
>
> Alex, William and Gilberto are mentioned since we are the most active
> contributors.
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> We have 2 days to finish edits.
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> William - I attempted to add your suggestions to the paper regarding issue
> 11. You are free to revise further.
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> Gilberto - I merged some of your texts, yet it seems you are the only one
> I saw interested in resolving issue 12 where the reviewer asks to remove
> the "Model Application and Implementation Barriers" section. Please suggest
> your corrections as soon as possible. If you cannot do this by tomorrow I
> will do my best to add a response based on your idea. Yet I really hope you
> can do this before me.
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>
>
> Please finalize any edits you have - and if anyone has any objection to
> the text, please raise it within one day since after tomorrow I will start
> closing down all issues.
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>
> I would ask for a volunteer that will go over the paper once more after
> its finalized and check for typos and grammar - we do not want the paper to
> return again due to this issue. Time is tight, so please volunteer fast.
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> Hopefully we can get it done in time.
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> Jacob
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> On Tue, Jan 4, 2022 at 7:25 AM Alexander Kulesza <
> alexander.kulesza at novadiscovery.com> wrote:
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> Dear Jacob, dear all,
>
> thanks for endorsing my figure. I'll gladly add this. Please find enclosed
> the .png.
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>
> What you say makes sense and I agree that exaggerating changes is not
> speeding up approval. Please still consider it as a tool to perform "major"
> change (ordering of sections is a major change of a paper in my opinion)
> without changing too much the sections as such. But I agree that this could
> be tried out should the reviewers insist.
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> I therefore reverted the table change (disconnecting ist from Figure 1)
> and suggest the following Figure caption:
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> "Figure 2: Sketch of difficulties persistent that impede reproducibility,
> credibility, utility and integration of models, especially in computational
> biology. An assignment of these difficulties to the four different concepts
> interpreting them as hurdles is attempted. We would like to point out that
> this sequential assessment model indicated in the graph is only one of the
> possibilities a modeler would assess the suitability of available models.
> In the rest of the paper we therefore address each difficulty separately. "
>
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> With that sentence we can discuss the difficulties in any order.
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> Best
>
> Alexander
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> On Tue, 4 Jan 2022 at 13:24, Jacob Barhak <jacob.barhak at gmail.com> wrote:
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> Yes Alex,
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> Your image is much better than mine, please use it instead in the paper
> and send a link to the image itself in an acceptable image format so I can
> upload it to the submission system later on.
>
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>
> As for changing the table and order, I am not sure. Although it may be
> possible. We need to think about it. Yet we really are crunched in time, so
> I am leaning to say no.
>
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>
> First, because some of the difficulties span more than one category, for
> example unit standardization affects integration as well as
> reproducibility, only it appears first at reproducibility, therefore it was
> placed there in the figure.
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>
>
> Second, if you look at the text there are some transition sentences among
> sections, that connect them, so swapping those around may just mess things.
> I am not sure it if will also mess up acronym definitions on the first
> appearance as well, so shuffling order is not something's I would do unless
> necessary. And it was not requested by reviewers anyway.
>
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> I am also trying to minimize changes and focus only on what was requested
> rather than change a lot more. Otherwise we may never finish changing
> things since each one of the 18 of us will have a one last item they MUST
> have corrected. I personally did not add some recent publications I had,
> although I added one publication James asked to add in the previous
> approval round and corrected one that Sheriff mentioned. Yet I really want
> to avoid opening the paper to significant changes.
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> If you start opening corrections beyond what was requested, this will
> drag on forever since we do have a large list of contributors and each one
> of us will generate a new idea. So please focus on what was asked unless
> absolutely necessary.
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> So I suggest not changing the table, and changing only the figure and
> keeping order intact. I hope I am projecting the sense of urgency - we had
> the paper lying around for a couple of weeks during the holiday without
> much progress, I ask not to escalate things just because a deadline is
> looming.
>
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>
> If you have extra time on your hands in the next couple of days, I suggest
> you focus on addressing the last two points in the response that we have
> not resolved yet. I know Gilberto wanted to fix one of them, yet you are
> welcome to do it. Those are things requested by the review
>
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> Hopefully my arguments make sense.
>
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> Jacob
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> On Tue, Jan 4, 2022, 06:45 Alexander Kulesza <
> alexander.kulesza at novadiscovery.com> wrote:
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> Dear all,
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>
>
> I have thought about the additional Figure requested by the reviewer.
> Jacob your Figure nicely shows the assignment of the difficulties we detail
> in our central table with the 4 big concepts.
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> I feel however that the text-heavy figure is a lot o redundancy with the
> rest of the elements (existing figure & table). Therefore I wanted to throw
> another suggestion forward (inspired by systematic reviews narrowing down
> eligible studies/data).
>
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>
> @all please notice that the assignment I would do is a bit different to
> what is currently done in the paper. The order of sections would have to be
> altered. Not sure if that is acceptable.
>
> <image.png>
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> The table with Difficulties (hurdles) and solutions would then be
>
> *Difficulty*
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> *Potential Solutions*
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> Reproducibility
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> Models are written in different languages
>
> Common transport specifications such as SBML or CellML, and proper
> documentation and annotation
>
> Models are hard to locate
>
> Archive web sites such as: BioModels, SimTK, IMAGWiki, and the future
> modeleXchange
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> Lack of common platforms for executing models and simulations
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> Platforms such as BioSimulators, and runBioSimulations
>
> Unit standardization
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> Standardization efforts, and machine learning solutions such as
> ClinicalUnitMapping.com
> <https://nam04.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=http%3A%2F%2Fclinicalunitmapping.com%2F&data=04%7C01%7CWinston.Garira%40univen.ac.za%7Ce905d707905f4301190c08d9da477a53%7Cf38ba9d8554c48a2ae4213b1e7f3c797%7C0%7C0%7C637780823036368924%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJWIjoiMC4wLjAwMDAiLCJQIjoiV2luMzIiLCJBTiI6Ik1haWwiLCJXVCI6Mn0%3D%7C3000&sdata=ctmyqlzzJKJ%2F41ZusRl2q4fJYWbJ6%2FuPzv%2BDs40dqZs%3D&reserved=0>
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> Credibility
>
> Models have built-in barriers to Evaluating model credibility
>
> Better modeling practices, documentation, and tests.
>
> Data availability and measurement definitions
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> Models that merge human interpretation, and newer measurement devices
>
> Missing annotations in models
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> Adoption of policies such as those COMBINE suggests
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> Utility
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> Models are not consistently licensed to allow for reuse
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> Abandoning some old school open source licenses and promoting licenses
> that release to public domain
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> Different scales and modeling paradigms
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> Standardization effort and centralization tools
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> Stochastic modeling difficulties
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> Development of tools that guarantee repeatability and standards to address
> stochastic simulations
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> Integration
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> Model application and implementation barriers
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> Education of modelers, users, and the public
>
> Modeling requires adaptation towards integration
>
> Tools for composing models such as SBML-Comp, and SemGen
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> Following this assignment.
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> Please let me know what you think. I have added this suggestion in track
> changes mode to the revision draft.
>
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> Best
>
> Alexander
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> On Mon, 3 Jan 2022 at 07:27, Jacob Barhak <jacob.barhak at gmail.com> wrote:
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> Thanks Alex,
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>
> You did great by adding the new material that the reviewers actually asked
> for. This is great - I found myself adding the new FDA document to find out
> that you already added it - I just voice read it ona long drive and
> figured it fits well - it seems you were faster - great.
>
>
>
> I merged your edits and I am ok with adding your response to the reviewers
> - I only had an issue with one example paragraph that you deleted - I left
> it with a comment - please check if it is possible to keep this example
> somewhere in the text.
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> I will assemble a letter that includes all those responses point by point
> and will try to use your text almost verbatim if possible. You really bring
> important knowledge with you.
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> It seems most points have been answered to some level - even a figure was
> created - although I wish I was a better artist.
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> I will try to assemble the response letter for everyone within the next
> few days. And unless there will be objections I will try to pass it by
> reviewers with a new version. If the new version is accepted, we will do a
> final approval round before publication.
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> Many thanks to all those who contributed.
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> Jacob
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> On Sun, Jan 2, 2022 at 7:27 AM Alexander Kulesza <
> alexander.kulesza at novadiscovery.com> wrote:
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> Dear all,
>
>
>
> Happy new year to everyone. I hope that you are all well and safe and have
> spent a nice holiday season.
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> I have tried to address
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> *Reviewer 2 *
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>
> *Moreover, when the authors mention ASME V&V40 procedure, it could be
> useful to spend few words about the model credibility pipeline drawn for
> predictive models in biomedicine, such as the one suggested in "Credibility
> of in Silico Trial Technologies-A Theoretical Framing", Viceconti, M.,
> Juarez, M.A., Curreli, C., ...Russo, G., Pappalardo, F., IEEE Journal of
> Biomedical and Health Informatics, 2020, 24(1), pp. 4–13, 8884189. For this
> specific aspect, the authors should talk about "specific question of
> interest" and not "specific purpose" in the paragraph called "Credibility
> of Models" to follow in such a way a standardised language.*
>
>
>
> I have worked on the followng document in "track changes" mode:
>
> https://docs.google.com/document/d/1IMEgmdNkx-EsnOjGuegpenSIMmKIkK00Lc8Gred3QxM/edit
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> Actually, I ended up in changing rather drastically the section. I think
> that all ideas and all text is conserved, but I would very much like to
> encourage you to read, comment and challenge this revision. Please tell me
> if that goes to far. No problem to revert to an earlier version if
> necessary.
>
>
>
> I suggest the following formulation in the rebuttal letter:
>
>
>
> When trying to better describe the "credibility pipeline" (CoU definition,
> verification, validation, uncertainty quantification, e.g. as described in
> Viceconti et al. 2019) or others, we noticed that the section about
> credibility could be restructured in order to put the reader (not
> necessarily familiar with regulatory assessment of models) in the position
> to follow the argumentation.
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> We now roughly follow the following flow of writing:
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> - Every model needs a purpose and credibility is tied to that purpose as
> well as repeatability and reproducibility
>
> - Credibility is essential for models that have impact on regulated areas
> or people's lives which is why regulatory authorities issue guidance
>
> - The probably most advanced guidance ASME V&V40 suggests a risk-based
> approach and pipeline to establish credibility of a model. It is
> overarching and widely applicable
>
> - Regulators and modelers work together (for example in frame of the model
> informed drug development program MIDD) in order to better understand,
> better apply and better uptake different kinds of models in regulatory
> applications
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> - More work is needed to harmonize, stay up to date and to be more
> inclusive
>
>
>
> We hope that with the rather extensive change of the wording and
> additional passages as well as citations (see below) we could address the
> concern of reviewer 2 (and the general remarks of reviewer 1).
>
>
>
> " In 2018 the American Society of Mechanical Engineers (ASME) issued an
> important guidance ASME V&V 40 (ASME, 2018) of how to assess credibility of
> computational models of medical devices through verification and validation
> (V&V). The guideline is centered around the definition of the context of
> use (CoU) of the model which is formulated based on the questions of
> interest the model will answer. The CoU is then analyzed in terms of the
> “model risk” - being the influence the model exerts on a decision and the
> potential consequences these decisions might incur. Commensurate with this
> model risk the modeler suggests establish the credibility goals, perform
> verification validation and uncertainty quantification actions and then
> assess the outcome of this exercise in order to allow judging the
> acceptability of the model CoU. Key to this guidance is its overarching
> nature which also allows adoption in other (e.g. drug development) fields
> irrespective of the model type (Kuemmel 2020, Viceconti 2019)."
>
>
>
> We also feel that it is essential to underline the cross-discipline
> viewpoint of the ASME V&V40 which is further elaborated by the cited paper
> by formalizing the verification, validation and uncertainty quantification
> VVUQ pipeline across model types.
>
>
>
> We therefore have added the following statement
>
> " In the paper by (Viceconti 2019) the verification, validation and
> uncertainty quantification (VVUQ) pipeline is streamlined to different
> types of models. It is, perhaps, the closest to score credibility across
> model types from mechanistic physics driven models to machine learning
> models. However, it is still short of including very recent developments
> such as ensemble models, although it touches upon the topic."
>
>
>
> We additionally strengthened our argumentation by citing additional
> literature
>
>
>
> Bai, JPF, Earp, JC, Florian, J, et al. *Quantitative systems
> pharmacology: Landscape analysis of regulatory submissions to the US Food
> and Drug Administration. *CPT Pharmacometrics Syst Pharmacol. 2021; 10:
> 1479– 1484. doi.org
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> FDA (2021b). Assessing the Credibility of Computational Modeling and
> Simulation in Medical Device Submissions. *FDA*
> Available at:
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> Galluppi, G.R., Brar, S., Caro, L., Chen, Y., Frey, N., Grimm, H.P., Rudd,
> D.J., Li, C.-C., Magee, M., Mukherjee, A., Nagao, L., Purohit, V.S., Roy,
> A., Salem, A.H., Sinha, *V., Suleiman, A.A., Taskar, K.S., Upreti, V.V.,
> Weber, B. and Cook, J. (2021), Industrial Perspective on the Benefits
> Realized From the FDA’s Model-Informed Drug Development Paired Meeting
> Pilot Program*. Clin Pharmacol Ther, 110: 1172-1175. doi:10.1002/cpt.2265
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>
> Kuemmel, C., Yang, Y., Zhang, X., Florian, J., Zhu, H., Tegenge, M.,
> Huang, S.-M., Wang, Y., Morrison, T. and Zineh, I. (2020), *Consideration
> of a Credibility Assessment Framework in Model-Informed Drug Development:
> Potential Application to Physiologically-Based Pharmacokinetic Modeling and
> Simulation.* CPT Pharmacometrics Syst. Pharmacol., 9: 21-28. doi.org
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> Musuamba, FT, Skottheim Rusten, I, Lesage, R, et al. Scientific and
> regulatory evaluation of mechanistic in silico drug and disease models in
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> Pharmacol. 2021; 10: 804– 825. doi:10.1002/psp4.12669
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>
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> Viceconti M, Emili L, Afshari P, et al. Possible Contexts of Use for In
> Silico Trials Methodologies: A Consensus-Based Review. *IEEE J Biomed
> Health Inform*. 2021;25(10):3977-3982. doi:10.1109/JBHI.2021.3090469
>
>
>
>
>
> All the best
>
> Alexander
>
>
>
> On Sun, 19 Dec 2021 at 03:10, Jacob Barhak <jacob.barhak at gmail.com> wrote:
>
>
>
> Greetings to the paper contributors,
>
>
>
> You may have seen my other message where I posted the reviews to our
> paper. I am sending those again below to start a new thread discussing
> possible revisions.
>
>
>
> Here is a checklist for revisions required:
>
>
>
> 1. We should discuss the references that reviewer 1 raised and add
> them as reference
> 2. Reviewer 1 asked for more discussion around V&V40 - I believe Alex
> added the text there originally - Alex do you think you can address the
> request of the reviewer?
> 3. Reviewer 1 asked to focus on COVID-19 at the title - I am not sure
> we wish to limit our scope since many of our ideas are applicable far
> beyond COVID-19 - I leave it up for discussion in the group on how to
> address this request by the reviewer
> 4. Reviewer 1 asked for additional graphics - I am unsure how to
> address this beyond ur current diagram - ideas will help
> 5. We need to check the "Contribution to the field" section for
> grammar and spelling - if someone can contribute more elegant text - now is
> the time - I looked over it now and found no issues - yet I may have missed
> something - this section may have been missed since it was added last and
> perhaps vetted less than other sections. Also Reviewer 2 asked for grammar
> corrections, so it is worthwhile proof reading the paper as a whole.
> 6. Reviewer 2 asks for major rewrite to emphasize why the problems are
> there - I think we should explain that the core of the paper is the table
> and perhaps emphasize it in the paper beyond what the current text - we
> also should reply to the reviewer and explain that the paper is composed of
> contributions from a large group and we made an effort to include every
> voice in the choir - each of those voices is important and needs to be
> preserved - hopefully it will convince the reviewer that change we will add
> will be sufficient
> 7. Reviewer 2 asks to revise the introduction - I believe some
> changes are possible - yet the introduction includes contributions from
> many authors - at least 10 - and I fear losing something important someone
> contributed - if someone has an idea on how to address this reviewer
> without a painful transformation, please reply to this message.
> 8. Reviewer 2 wants additional discussion around the "reproducibility
> crisis" section and asks a valid question about expectations we should
> address - "“Computational biomedical modeling… was expected to be less
> affected by the reproducibility crisis.” Is this true, and why would it be
> so? " - My answer to the reviewer is that unlike biological processes that
> have random nature and experiments would not repeat if repeated, while
> computer software should be deterministic and it should be repeatable if
> designed well. Unfortunately we are not experiencing this promise - yet I
> believe the reviewer wants more discussion beyond this section so I am
> happy to discuss this.
> 9. Reviewer 2- writes: "Models are Hard to Locate: Are the authors
> suggesting that entire simulation workflows, from model construction to
> analysis, should be publicly available? At what point does one consider
> intellectual property? Do the authors advocate for such extensive
> publishing for all models, or only ones that are intended to be widely
> re-used? - those are important points we need to discuss - we need to
> better explain the difficulties we are having when creating models and the
> reviewer is absolutely correct about expanding the discussion to IP - I
> suggest we create a thread for this discussion and reference it - I
> suggest it we merged with the licensing issue that I will address later -
> there is a strong connection there - the reviewer was very observant and
> sees the bigger problem. However,we need to eventually distill our
> discussion to recommendations that will inline.
> 10. Reviewer 2 asks that we fix the unit standardization section - I
> believe Hana and myself were the largest contributors there - Hana - I will
> start a discussion on that topic in a separate email where we can publicly
> discuss how to fix this - others will be welcome to contribute.
> 11. Reviewer 2 asks that we better handle the section on Data
> availability and measurement definitions: in think we need to emphasize
> solutions and separate it from issues that may not be solvable. Ideas are
> welcome.
> 12. Reviewer 2 asks good questions with regards to licensing following
> our text- I personally have good answers to the reviewer and William and I
> had some discussion on the topic in this list I suggest we expand this
> discussion in a separate thread - hopefully William and perhaps others will
> join the discussion. This discussion should also address the IP issues
> raised by the reviewer for the "models are hard to locate section."
> 13. Reviewer 2 asks to handle the Model Application and Implementation
> Barriers section. We should decide what to do there, the section may need
> expansion since the ideas there are solid, yet the section is short so
> perhaps enhancing it makes better sense. I am open to suggestions.
>
>
>
> Those are the items I located and my suggestions. It seems we need
> attention from Alex, Hana, myself and william. However, anyone on the list
> is welcome to participate and suggest changes.
>
>
>
> I will start the discussion threads on specific topics. Hopefully we can
> get it done quickly.
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> Jacob
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> ########### Original Reviews #############
>
>
>
> There are 2 reviews - both require major changes. I am copying the
> relevant text below. If more appear, I will let you know, yet I only got
> this message today although the reviews are dated a few days ago.
>
>
>
> Reviewer 1:
>
> Recommendation for the Editor: Substantial revision is required
>
>
>
> Please list your revision requests for the authors and provide your
> detailed comments, including highlighting limitations and strengths of the
> review. If you have additional comments based on Q2 and Q3 you can add them
> as well.
>
>
>
> Karr and co-authors made an interesting and exaustive point about the
> reproducibility crisis that leads to inability to reuse and integrate
> models, especially about COVID-19 disease.
> Within the manuscript some typos and missing information are present.
> I'd suggest the authors to revise the entire manuscript especially in
> terms of the state of the art, revising and updating the most relevant
> examples of computational models dealing with COVID-19 and in general about
> some semi-standardised proposals about the pipeline to follow for the
> verification and validation of model credibility. In particular, the
> authors failed to mention and cite some major results on in silico modeling
> about COVID-19 up to now. See for example:
> a."In silico trial to test COVID-19 candidate vaccines: a case study with
> UISS platform", Russo, G., Pennisi, M., Fichera, E., ...Viceconti, M.,
> Pappalardo, F., BMC Bioinformatics, 2020, 21, 527.
> b. Russo G, Di Salvatore V, Sgroi G, Parasiliti Palumbo GA, Reche PA,
> Pappalardo F. "A multi-step and multi-scale bioinformatic protocol to
> investigate potential SARS-CoV-2 vaccine targets" [published online ahead
> of print, 2021 Oct 5]. Brief Bioinform. 2021;bbab403.
> doi:10.1093/bib/bbab403.
> Moreover, when the authors mention ASME V&V40 procedure, it could be
> useful to spend few words about the model credibility pipeline drawn for
> predictive models in biomedicine, such as the one suggested in "Credibility
> of in Silico Trial Technologies-A Theoretical Framing", Viceconti, M.,
> Juarez, M.A., Curreli, C., ...Russo, G., Pappalardo, F., IEEE Journal of
> Biomedical and Health Informatics, 2020, 24(1), pp. 4–13, 8884189.
> For this specific aspect, the authors should talk about "specific question
> of interest" and not "specific purpose" in the paragraph called
> "Credibility of Models" to follow in such a way a standardised language.
> Moreover, the authors should refer to COVID-19 also in the title, with a
> specific mention about the fact that the main topic of model integration in
> computational biology will be discussed inside the COVID-19 context.
> Furthermore, for the model key concepts such as
> Reusability-Extensibility-Extractability-Portability the authors should
> described and outlined through a graphical sketch or visual representation
> that summarises these key point.
> The authors should also fix some grammar and writing typos present in the
> "Contribution to the field" section.
>
>
>
> a. Is the quality of the figures and tables satisfactory?
> - No
>
> b. Does the reference list cover the relevant literature adequately and in
> an unbiased manner?
> - No
>
> c. Does this manuscript refer only to published data? (unpublished or
> original data is not allowed for this article type)
> - Yes
>
> d. Does the review include a balanced, comprehensive, and critical view of
> the research area?
> - Yes
>
>
>
>
>
> Reviewer 2
>
>
>
> Please list your revision requests for the authors and provide your
> detailed comments, including highlighting limitations and strengths of the
> review. If you have additional comments based on Q2 and Q3 you can add them
> as well.
>
>
>
>
>
> The article often reads as a stream-of-consciousness account of the
> discussions that took place but lacks a clear thesis or recommendations. It
> is not clear what, if anything, the authors are advocating for. It is not
> always clear why the issues being discussed are problematic, or that they
> can be reasonably addressed. Some of the issues raised are indeed important
> and should be discussed, but the paper lacks focus and does not tell a
> cohesive story. I believe this manuscript requires a major re-write to be
> suitable for publication. The authors should consider narrowing the scope
> of the discussion and focusing on a cohesive set of recommendations or open
> questions. More specifically, I make a few suggestions below:
>
> Major comments
> 1. The introduction is long and repeats itself (e.g., “much less is known
> about how viral infections spread throughout the body…” is repeated
> verbatim). It is not clear from the introduction what the main goal of the
> paper is or why the “reproducibility crisis” is truly a crisis. Why is the
> discussion of composition and black/white box models relevant to the
> introduction? Further, this section is subtitled “the promise of modeling”,
> which does not seem to match the content.
> 2. The Reproducibility Crisis: “Computational biomedical modeling… was
> expected to be less affected by the reproducibility crisis.” Is this true,
> and why would it be so? One would think that more complex models would
> suffer more from a lack of reproducibility. It may be helpful to define
> what exactly the “reproducibility crisis” refers to.
> 3. Models are Hard to Locate: Are the authors suggesting that entire
> simulation workflows, from model construction to analysis, should be
> publicly available? At what point does one consider intellectual property?
> Do the authors advocate for such extensive publishing for all models, or
> only ones that are intended to be widely re-used?
> 4. Unit standardization: The conversion from PFU or TCID50 to individual
> virions is likely to differ across viruses – are the authors focused on
> COVID here? Are the authors advocating for a standard conversion factor? It
> is not clear what the purpose of this discussion is. As the authors
> mention, different scales require different units. Even at a single scale,
> different models may require different units for numerical reasons. It is
> not clear what the authors are advocating for here.
> 5. Data availability and measurement definitions: This section seems to
> outline limitations of available data, but again makes no recommendations
> or proposed solution to any of the issues raised. Is this the intention?
> Most of the issues raised here reflect limitations of experimental science
> or data privacy, which likely cannot be meaningfully addressed by the
> modeling community.
> 6. Models are Not Consistently Licensed…: Are the authors implying here
> that all modeling work should be published with no rights reserved? Is it
> reasonable to expect modelers to make their work freely usable by others
> for profit? Is it reasonable for institutions to allow this? How much does
> this really contribute to reproducibility and utility?
> 7. Model Application and Implementation Barriers: This section seems
> unnecessary and out of place.
> 8. There are grammar and punctuation errors scattered throughout; please
> edit carefully.
>
>
>
>
>
> a. Is the quality of the figures and tables satisfactory?
> - Not Applicable
>
> b. Does the reference list cover the relevant literature adequately and in
> an unbiased manner?
> - Yes
>
> c. Does this manuscript refer only to published data? (unpublished or
> original data is not allowed for this article type)
> - Yes
>
> d. Does the review include a balanced, comprehensive, and critical view of
> the research area?
> No answer given.
>
>
>
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